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Here is the first draft that was edited. As you can see, there were some mistakes I have made and Albert corrected those mistakes for me. He gave me some good comments.

Here is the final draft of my essay about the Greasers. I worked on it very carefully and read over and over to see if it was well written. If it wasn't, I had to change some few sentences to make it better.

media type="file" key="Essay Record.mp3" Here is a short podcast of me talking about the Greasers in the essay. I clearly enjoyed recording my voice in garage band. I recorded my voice by reading from the essay I wrote.