GREASERS+PMOON13

media type="file" key="the final version of englsih podcast.mp3"__** The creation of the podcast enabled me to catch mistakes that I wouldn't be able to catch by simply reading with my eyes, or reading out loud. It was really different; editing by listening to the podcast. From now on, I think I will try to record everything on my podcast, and then try to edit it. This seems to be more effective. (In addition, the reason to why I think I can catch my mistakes is because of the tone of voice. Sentences that don't make sense, are the ones I tend to stumble upon) __
 * __The Podcast for the Greasers Essay: Ultimate Version
 * __The 2nd Draft of Greasers Essay: Edited by David Kim

By having my essay edited by my peer, I was able to catch mistakes in my essay that I couldn't catch. He also had different perspectives of looking at my story. I did not necessarily agree with everything my peer advised me to change, add, or do but I was grateful he took the time and effort because it helped enhance the quality of my essay greatly. Also, I really loved the fact that he did not only edit it in a grammatical sense; he also gave me his opinions about the story.

__The Final Draft of Greasers Essay __ I tried to do last minute finsh-ups from the 2nd draft of the Greasers Essay. I read over my essay, recorded my essay with the podcast, and tried to catch any minor/major mistakes that would really help me. As I said, the podcast was extremely efficient. I was able to catch most of the minor mistakes. Because this was the final version, I read and read over my essay to make sure it was in the best form that I could possibly make it into. **