JaneC13

♥ Dreams are today's answers to tomorrow's answers.

♥---♥ My brother Sam is Dead

media type="file" key="sam meeker.m4v" This is a sildeshow of the character Sam meeker, from the book "My brother Sam is dead." He is the older brother of the family and joins the war. He has the characteristics of stubborn, adventurous and confident.

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This is a keynote journal from the novel, "My brother Sam is Dead". This is the summary of the story, untill chapter 14. You can enjoy them by watching the fun picture with it.

This is a newspaper of the Redding, which is the main town of the book "My brother Sam is Dead." It contains and explains the conditions of the America during the Revolutionary War.

This is a essay of the character Sam, who is the older brother of the Tim. It tells you my ideas of Sam's characteristics and many effects he caused.

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He called her on the road From a lonely cold hotel room Just to hear her say I love you one more time But when he heard the sound Of the kids laughing in the background He had to wipe away a tear from his eye A little voice came on the phone Said daddy when you coming home He said the first thing that came to his mind

Im already there Take a look around Im the sunshine in your hair Im the shadow on the ground Im the whisper in the wind Im your imaginary friend And I know Im in your prayers Oh Im already there

She got back on the phone Said I really miss you darling Dont worry about the kids theyll be alright Wish I was in your arms Lying right there beside you But I know that Ill be in your dreams tonight And Ill gently kiss your lips Touch you with my fingertips So turn out the light and close your eyes

Im already there Dont make a sound Im the beat in your heart Im the moonlight shining down Im the whisper in the wind And Ill be there until the end Can you feel the love that we share Oh Im already there

We may be a thousand miles apart But Ill be with you wherever you are

Im already there Take a look around Im the sunshine in your hair Im the shadow on the ground Im the whisper in the wind And Ill be there until the end Can you feel the love that we share Oh Im already there Oh Im already There

I fixed many grammar mistakes and added more details to show Sam's role to his brother. This is the fixed paper of the newspaper and the essay of "My brother Sam is Dead



Our school had a assignment to write two kinds of poems- Narrative and Symbolic poems* Narrative Poems - Poems that tells you a story- This is my Narrative Poem, called "The Gloomy Day" This is my poem of the day when my brother was born. It was my real experience that I couldn't forget untill now. At those times I felt very lonely and sad, but now I am happy about having my brother!!:)

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 * Symbolism - A poem that represents and symbols something. This is a symbolic poem Called "Winterlight".

Winterlight

In one street where streetlight shines, brightly When every houses are sleeping with white blanket on their top, smoothly With the noise of children building snowman, happily Walking in the snow with printing footsteps, clearly

Remembering the time spend with the white snow

Walking through the streets with the happy memories Watching children running, rolling on the snow

Trying to forget hardships and tiredness The man press the snow deeply to mark his footsteps As his mark gets deeper and deeper, shadows gets longer and longer

Looking at the moon of streetlight of the moon which shines and indicates his way the light is only hope of winter day with the shine of winterlight he walk out into the dark silent snow

♥This poem is about the man who visited the town in the winter. This man was used to live this town and remebers his happy childhood. By looking at the streetlight and the moon, he gets hope and walks out. I wanted to symbol the streetlight,moon, children, snowman, shadows and footsteps. It all shows the man's memory and childhood.  [|Poetry Final]  [|Vocab]

♥---♥ True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle This is the powerpoint about the character analysis of the book called " The True Confession of Charlotte Doyle. There are 5 characters of Captain Jaggery, Seahawk, Mr. Keetch, Charlotte and Captain Jaggery

Teacher's Comment : Jane, You did a nice job with your vocab and character analysis. Your vocab does have some problems though. Some of your sentences are using synonyms instead of the actual vocabulary word. In other sentences, you are using the word incorrectly. If you are unsure, look up some examples of correct usage before you write your sentence. Your character analysis only had problems with spelling and other writing conventions.


 * This is the stories that I wrote based on the book called "The True Confession of Charlotte Doyle." Rather than the sailing the ship called Seahawk, my story was about the train trip. I changed the characters, endings from the original story.

Teacher's comment : Jane, Great Job!!! I like reading your reconstructed story. You did a nice job keeping most of the elements of the story intact. I was able to find most of the story elements I was looking for, but there were some missing. I like that you tried to introduce some dialogue into the story. I know that is something that we talked about. One thing you need to do is format the dialogue correctly. If you are not sure, you should look in the book or ask me. I also wish you were a little more creative with your story. It seems as if there were times where your changes were very minimal. You even kept most of the people's names the same. Overall, I would say you did a nice job that with a little more work could be a fantastic job.

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In my English class, we saw the movie called "Grease." It is the movie of the group of boys who are very wild and free. But if you look carefully, they are very emotional and weak character. We wrote the essay about the people's view of the Greasers. We had a partner who fixed my essay and made a final draft and recorded.

♥ This is the recording of my final draft :) media type="file" key="jane recording.m4a"

♥ This is my first draft fixed and edited by my partner. I made < Grammar mistake and read it over to make a final Draft.

♥ This is the final Draft of my essay. I gave the title of " People's view of the Greasers".

♥ This is the vocab of the outsiders. "http://static.slidesharecdn.com/swf/ssplayer2.swf?doc=vocaboutsidersjanec-090506085516-phpapp02&stripped_title=vocab-outsiders-jane-c" type="