The+True+Confessions+of+Charlotte+Doyle

This is a powerpoint for "The True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle". This powerpoint includes a brief description of the main characters. It also has some quotes from the characters that best describes themselves. This is a recreation of the book called, "The True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle. My partner and I worked on this story together. Our written story is similar to the book, "The True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle," but the character name and the settings are different.

Nice Job! I can tell a lot of time and effort was put into these assignments. However, there are some areas that are lacking. The first is the character analysis. You two did a good job of finding quotes and using descriptive statements, but the two don't work very well together. Some of the quotes barely show any of the personality of the character you were trying to describe. I think you two could have worked a little harder on this part of the project.

Concerning the story, I thought it was great. I like how you mirrored the plot of the original story with your own story. I liked how you incorporated nearly all of the key events I was looking for. The areas of your story that I had trouble with revolved around the consistency of it. Your font changed, your styles changed, and at times, it seemed as if your plot changed. One of you used a lot of dialogue, the other did not. It is things like this that should have been ironed out in the days before the due date. One of you is also better at using writing conventions. It would have been nice if you two could have worked together a little better, but that was not the case. You two were scrambling to get things finished instead all the way until the minute it was due. Next time, get things early and fix them.

Chapter Work 18/22 Consistency 7/10 Creativity 8.5/10 Completeness 9/10 Conventions 8/10