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Quote - Keep it simple stupid
I like this quote because I like the idea that i shouldn't make things complicated. It says that you should live simply, and not complicated things up so that you make things harder than it is.

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===This powerpoint slide show is basically a summary of the book, My brother Sam is dead. I have made 3 entries for each chapter, and a picture for each of the entries. It was a total of 14 chapters, and so there were 42 entries for the whole book. For each entry I have wrote important events that have occurred in the chapter and briefly described them.===

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===This podcast is a group project that I have done. It is also about the book, My brother Sam is dead. However, this podcast is about Betsy, who is one of the characters of the book. We have described her characteristic by recording them and put pictures matching to that characteristic.=== ===This newsletter is a newspaper that might have been written in the times of Revolutionary war. I have chosen the time of the beginning of the war, and wrote articles about that time.I have wrote an interview of Sam, asking him questions and making up the answers that Sam might have said. Also, I wrote article on the future and the effects of the war, predicting what would probably happen later in the war.===

This is an essay that is also about the book "My Brother Sam is dead". In this essay I have described the influence of Sam, the bigger brother, to Tim, the little brother. I have wrote that Sam gave a bad influence to Tim. I wrote this because Sam was very selfish and headstrong during the war, and only caused Tim hardships.

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=Narrative poem=



exposition – Introduces my love story Rising action – Having good times climax – I fight with her Falling action - We can't get along again Resolution - We break up

This poem is a narrative poem that I wrote. It is about a love that I thought was doing well, but broke apart because of something small. It has 3 differnt kind of literary device, which were simile, metaphor, and repetition. On the top I have made a basic story line of the poem, showing the exposition, rising action, climax, the falling action, and the resolution. =Lyric Poem=



This is a lyric poem that I wrote. Named, "the guest", it is about fall, the time when you get lonely, and get ready for a change. I used symbolism to say that the "guest" came into my house to change me to get ready for the harsh winter. I have also added a little taste of loneliness, to represent fall.

Symbolism poem
This is symbolism poem that I wrote. It is a poem where I symbolized the gun sound as war, although I failed to not put the actual word "war" in the poem. I have wrote it to say that there should be no war, by saying that the sound of the gunfire should be never heard again. This is a powerpoint that describes the character of the book, The true confessions of Charlotte Doyle. It also has quotes from the book, which shows their characteristic. The characters that were described in this presentation are Charlotte Doyle, Captain Jaggery, Seahawk, Mr. Grummage, Zachariah, and Keetch. This is document that me and my group made about the book " The true confessions of Charlotte Doyle". It is a recreation of the book, except that the environemt and the setting is a bit different. For our group, we wrote it so that Charlotte rides a train from China to Korea instead of a ship.

Nice Job! I c an tell a lot of time and effort was put into these assignments. However, there are some areas that are lacking. The first is the character analysis. You two did a good job of finding quotes and using descriptive statements, but the two don't work very well together. Some of the quotes barely show any of the personality of the character you were trying to describe. I think you two could have worked a little harder on this part of the project.

Concerning the story, I thought it was great. I like how you mirrored the plot of the original story with your own story. I liked how you incorporated nearly all of the key events I was looking for. The areas of your story that I had trouble with revolved around the consistency of it. Your font changed, your styles changed, and at times, it seemed as if your plot changed. One of you used a lot of dialogue, the other did not. It is things like this that should have been ironed out in the days before the due date. One of you is also better at using writing conventions. It would have been nice if you two could have worked together a little better, but that was not the case. You two were scrambling to get things finished instead all the way until the minute it was due. Next time, get things early and fix them.

Chapter Work 18/22 Consistency 7/10 Creativity 8.5/10 Completeness 9/10 Conventions 8/10

This essay is about my opinion of the greasers in the movie, Grease. I have characterized them as a bunch of gangs who thinks friendship is more important than their own life. I have given many examples and supporting sentences for the claim. This essay is my second draft edited by Peter Moon. He has changed his editing into a blue color, so that I could see what changes he have made. media type="file" key="podcast for essay - final.mp3" This is a podcast of my final essay. I have recorded my own voice and read the whole essay out loud. I have given different tones and voices to make the podcast more lively.

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This is the visual representation of my english final