sarahconfessions



This is a revision of Charlotte Doyle in our words. In our story charlotte doyle: sarah ewing: davis zachariah: zack captain: maria johnson: loren barlow: Paul hollybrass: max keetch: John cranick: mark Morgan: Eleen fisk: malfoy dillingham: tom foley: fred

these are the people. Instead of a ship as the background, it's a private school. Sarah gets in a complicated situation with her classmates.



This is the keynote presentation of the characters in the book. The characters we analyzed is Charlotte Doyle, Capt. Jaggery, Seahawk, Mr. Grummage Zachariah, and Keetch. There are quotes that was set as an example for each analyzation.

Nice Job Girls!!! Your character analysis was done very well. There were some holes in it, but overall it was well put together. When it comes to your story, there are even more holes in it. It seems as if most of the story is written one way, but then small parts are written another way. Did you two share the load in this assignment? The story was hard to follow at times which makes it seem as if this was put together at the last minute. Please come talk to me about your story.

Chapter Work 8/10 Consistency 8/10 Creativity 9/10 Conventions 9/10 Completeness 9/10