EricP13

This is the Charcter Sketch of Dally Winston of the Outsiders book.

media type="file" key="Ordinary Teenagers Recording.mp3" This is the recording file for the essay on the Greasers.

This is my 2nd draft that was fixed by Austin Yoo.

This is my final draft of the essay.

Vocabulary of The Outsiders (on the word 'cowlick' the picture slightly goes over the sentence;; sorry 'bout that..)

Vocabulary from the book...

Charlotte Doyle Story

The character sketch for "The True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle"

Great Job with these assignments. Your vocab was great. Most of the pictures fit the definitions and most of the sentences used the terms correctly. Your character analysis was missing one quote for each of the characters, and it could have been formatted a little differently to make it easier to understand, but overall you did a nice job.  Your story was very interesting. I enjoyed how it was so different from everybody else's stories. Some of the changes were a bit extreme and/or weird, but you managed to keep most of the story intact even though so much of the story was different. There are events in the original story that I wish managed to find a way into your reconstruction, but you did get most of the events I was looking for. Great Job.

Creativity 10/10 Consistency 8/10 chapter work 8/10 Conventions 9.5/10 Completeness 10/10